I need help! Plz!

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By HaloODST56 Jan 31, 2020
Hey guys, I'm really needing help with my comics. They are just not the greatest and I want them to atleast be better from now on. So yeah I need you guy's help.

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81Ceta_Deta Jan 31, 2020

I do what Z does. I use techniques and ideas from other writers. I suggest you try that. Research vocabulary, the widespread language and proper use if grammar does a lot. Try to keep it continuous- little to no plotholes.

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HaloODST56 Jan 31, 2020

Thank you very much @Spartanz19

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Admiral-Sabree Jan 31, 2020

Well, from what I've seen of your comics they look pretty good. Got text boxes right off the bat. Tool me awhile to get those.

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Haloguy092 Jan 31, 2020

Take ispirationt from Monty Python.

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Spartanz19 Jan 31, 2020

If you're looking to make better storylines, I've got some tips. Read up! An extremely easy way to improve yourself is to study someone better than you. When you read a book, see what the author is doing to make the plot interesting. Do they draw out the main storyline by adding suspense? Maybe they include interesting subplots! This works for movies, TV shows, and practically everything. See what the professionals do to make their work interesting! Another tip is to practice! It's obvious, yes, but show your family and friends your work and see what they think. Ask them what they'd like to see improved. Hope this helps, I was in this position for years, and still am to a degree.

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HaloODST56 Jan 31, 2020

Thank you all SO much @February, @nigelninja11 &SpartanGregor113. You guys make me feel so good! Thank you all for the support! And ill do what you guys said

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SpartanGregor113 Jan 31, 2020

@nigelninja11 is right, man. I would be incredibly interested to see a scrapper story from you, because I think you could do it well. Also, taking what Survivor said in your last post (though I intend to be much less harsh about it) some pop-and-swaps using different colored armor pieces could work wonders in making said scrappers; would make them look like their armor is made of "scraps".

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nigelninja11 Jan 31, 2020

You’re comics are actually great. You have good storylines and you have fantastic photography skills. I think sometimes you need to figure out how to play your strengths, and like I said on your other comic, if you have more Halo ODSTs and Spartans, perhaps try a Scrappers storyline, or maybe move to Halo stories altogether.

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Febuary Jan 31, 2020

But I think the most basic thing is having a good story/plot.

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Febuary Jan 31, 2020

If you add some wicked plot-twist to them it would be pretty cool and you can also add suspenseful moments, or a favorite character death. Hopefully this helps!😂

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